Displacement: Francis

8/18/2013

Stripped naked
gave he thanks
to God

Maker
who always
loved him

Lover
who first
created him

then called him out
from heavy
guilt robes

to the weightless freedom
of total
exposure

Little brothers
followed.

Jean K. Horne
November 2, 1992

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9/27/2017 01:01:47 am

Hello, Jean! Though I know that you tried to form this as a poem, I just had a hard time understanding what is the overall though of your post. I just find it too short and the information were not organized. Making a poem is quite a challenging thing, that's why it is considered as one of the hardest pieces to make. It takes emotion combined with creativity to be able to make a great poem. But there is always a room for improvement, and I am hoping you'll improve your skills more!

Displacement: Francis

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